Look At Us
you saved my
life
one evening beneath the stars
no signs to guide us
just your clever
words
your confidence
keeps balance in the world
I am again with
you today
saving your
life in the sun
with the lure of writing
opening up before us
the wide expanse of the sea
the broad flight above the bay
between earth and cloud
between space and wet sand
we are right to
marvel
we are right to
travel
forward
together
look at us
look at you
look at me
our voices loud
and laughing
sailing off beyond a mast of trees
mapping out colors with wings
skimming the tops of our
heads
by some saving grace of heart
of starry nights and sunny morns
our presence
upon this surface
faces the glory of light in which
we are made
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My wonderful writer friend Haley will probably kill me for posting this but I found it today and feel like it needs to be shared. She and I did a writing exercise based on the enclosed photo and mine came to me poem form.
I am working on 'Burden' and this sort of melted my heart thinking of my characters and their circumstances. It seems as fitting as it does opposing. Eventually that will make sense, as in, when my story is complete.
I hope she will forgive me, after all, I'm pretty cute.
In propinquity,
Nic
Have you been watching Ter and me this weekend? You've written about us, too!
ReplyDeleteI wrote this some time ago but I was thinking the same thing after I read your blog and then read the poem back! I love how it resonates.
ReplyDeleteFurther evidence that we three are connected on a universal level!
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