Noel would often stop at the Charming Street Farmer’s
Market to smell the roses, attractively arranged in a decorative cart parked
along-side the store window in the cobblestone hall. Almost every time, Mr. Wincey would wave to
him from inside the floral shop standing behind an antique cash register,
brushing from his eyes the same wisp of hair haphazardly straying from his
salt-and-pepper comb-over, always smiling.
He was a curious fellow, Mr. Wincey.
A short, round man with a cheerful face and a pleasant English accent.
On this particular day, a chilly February morning in the
height of the Valentine’s Day spell, Noel was greeted by the amiable shopkeeper
replenishing the flowers. Noel smiled
timidly, his hands shoved deep in the pockets of his grey woolen coat and spoke,
“Nice flowers.”
Mr. Wincey’s face broke out in a jolly beam, sticking a
sprig of baby’s breath into a bountiful bouquet,
“Aren’t they just
marvelous!? It’s sweetheart season after
all. Fancy a bit of a bloom for yours?”
Noel shook his head self-consciously, “Nah.”
Mr. Wincey studied the young man quizzically for a moment
and continued to busy himself with the task at hand, “One day you will.”
Noel couldn’t resist the urge to lean forward, touch the
tip of his nose to a silky petal and inhale. “Excuse me, Sir … “ Noel began to as a question but the jovial man
interrupted.
“Please, call me
Alfred. Alfred Wincey.” He wiped his hands quickly on his apron and
offered one.
Noel reciprocated the gesture, “Noel. Nice to meet you, Sir.”
Mr. Wincey tittered, “Now,
what were you about to ask me, my boy?”
Noel eyed the cart overflowing with vibrant flowers and roses
of every color and felt his cheeks begin to resemble Mr. Wincey’s wares. “Well,
if I did have a special someone, how do I know what flower to choose?”
His query was akin to beautiful melodic music to Mr.
Wincey’s ears, “O Noel, the language of
flowers is complex. There is simply a
choice for every occasion, the sweetness of new love, heartache of lost
affection, birth, death, everything!
Symbolism my dear boy is a powerful thing and of course open to personal
interpretation but the semantics of flowers is sacred.”
Noel took in a sharp breath, “Sounds complicated.”
Mr. Wincey regarded the blossoms, “Allow me to explain. You see,
honeysuckles are a fine bloom used to define devotion, daffodils denote new
beginnings, dahlias deem dignity, lilacs whisper the first emotions of love and
daises praise innocence but roses truly make the heart sing.”
Noel did his best to take mental notes during Mr.
Wincey’s floral monologue. “And you should know. How did you come to know so much about
flowers?”
Mr. Wincey sighed and leaned a meaty hip against the side
of the cart, “Two words dear boy, Peggy
Potts. She was the most beautiful lass
this side of Heaven. In this story, I
have to tell you that at the start I was quite the prickly protagonist. I came upon her, such a stunning creature, at
the theatre and then I became a full-fledged leading man. She turned me unabashedly romantic.“ Mr. Wincey’s voice trailed off at the
memory. “O Peggy Pots was a girl of profound wisdom and elegant flare. Bright and curious, I loved her with all my
heart. Roses became a frequent means of
communication. Her Dad didn’t approve of
our stepping out together seeing as our pedigrees didn’t quite match up. At first, I’d pick flowers from people’s
gardens and leave them at her window or in the basket of her bicycle. I went on to carnations because they have a
long life-span for a flower and I wanted her to always remember my heart beat
for her.”
Noel was entranced by the florist’s tale. He pulled a single long stemmed rose from the
cart and twirled it between his fingers careful not to catch himself on the
thorns, “Her old man didn’t want you to
be together so you snuck her flowers?”
Mr. Wincey nodded, “You
are correct. She started to leave thank
you notes in reply that evolved into invitations for clandestine picnics and
strolls along the lakeside. We had so
many splendid moments together. Our
secret love was mired in symbolism because of the flowers. Became our tradition, our routine, inspiring
love; between us was a language full of color exciting hues and dreamy
undertones.”
Noel pressed him for more, “And?”
Mr. Wincey, charmed by the boys interest carried on, “O! Well then, let me see, what next …
during the last days of our courtship I would leave her one single rose on her
window sill, always having to reach up on my tippy toes to secure it. As you can see, I’m not a tall man. Some days they were white, for the purity and
secrecy of our love. Other days I’d
leave yellow to convey my delight and joy for her. Other days pink, to revel in all of her
loveliness but most times I left her red; the most iconic of all flowers, the
most expressive of love and romance and passion. She was my passion.”
Noel placed the flower back into its vase and inquired, “Where is she now?”
A flicker of sadness moved across Mr. Wincey’s otherwise
friendly eyes, “Long gone from me, dear
boy. Long gone.”
Noel felt a pang of regret for having asked, “You mean … “
Mr. Wincey rushed to correct him, “Goodness no. Her family packed
up and moved house to Paris and mine left shortly after for Canada. Call it a case of bad timing I suppose and we
were so young. The last time I saw her
we danced cheek to cheek right there in the street. No music, I just sang softly into her ear,
our favorite song.” Mr. Wincey began
to sing quietly getting lost again in the memory, “I love you, a bushel and a peck, a bushel and a peck and a hug around
the neck ...”
Noel took a moment to imagine them. He could tell Mr. Wincey, while small and
aged now was handsome in his youth. He
conceived Peggy Potts to be a startling brunette with warm eyes and soft lips,
resting her rosy cheek against a young Alfred’s shoulder as they danced while
he hummed tenderly into her ear. “You never saw her again?”
Mr. Wincey ceased singing and hung his head and smiled
warmly, “Not a day goes by when my
thoughts don’t rest on her pretty face, Noel. The last thing I said to her, I uttered as she
was boarding the train to Paris. I told
her that even with an ocean between us I would always love her with my whole
heart for my whole life.”
Noel cleared his throat, “That’s really sad, man.”
Mr. Wincey corrected his sad posture and piped up, “Indeed it is but my dear boy, true love
offers great surprises. My affection for
Peggy Potts delivered me to a new world with new dreams. Flowers.
I reckon if I hadn’t encountered her and talked to her with roses as
often as I did I may have ended up a bookbinder like my father. Instead, I am surrounded by beauty each day
and participate in bringing joy and comfort to others. It also gives me the chance to think fondly
of blessings. So tell me about your
sweetheart.”
Noel stiffened and jabbed his hands nervously back into
the pockets of his coat shrugging his shoulders, “Nothing to tell really, she doesn’t even know I’m alive. “
Mr. Wincey’s kind eyes twinkled, “Perhaps something from my cart?
It would make for such a lovely introduction. Go on, decide on something. My treat.”
Noel’s eyes widened with trepidation, face crimson at the
offer, “She wouldn’t like me.”
Mr. Wincey sucked his teeth and exclaimed, “Confidence, dear boy! When it comes to the fairer sex, the one
thing more powerful than the language of flowers is confidence. You are a dashing young man, handsome, caring
eyes. Golly, you’ve been standing in
this hallway listening to an old fool ramble on about ancient history. It’s a new day, the possibilities are
endless! And dear Noel, it is far worse to never try and wonder forever about
what might have been than it is to wrangle up the courage to act and fail. Always try.
Happiness is born out of audaciousness.
Trust me. Now, what shall I wrap
up for you? I won’t take no for an
answer.” Mr. Wincey grinned.
Noel took a deep breath and eyed the exquisite array of
blooms filling the cart. What would be
most appropriate for Ruby? He encounters
the effervescent vision of her every morning manning the reception area of the
neighboring office in his work building.
Through the glass dividing the wait area from the hall, she smiles to
him and nods whenever he passes by.
First eye contact induced a warm sensation that spread from the pit of
his stomach to the stems of his heart.
She was beautiful and he discovered her name only because someone called
ahead to her one afternoon to hold the elevator.
Mr. Wincey nudged the daydreaming boy, “So?”
Noel snapped out of his daze, “You know better than me, what do you think?”
The florist regarded the cart and then Noel, “That depends on what you wish to say.”
Noel paused on the thought and said, “Hello?”
Mr. Wincey broke out with a boisterous giggle, “You got me there, dear boy.”
Mr. Wincey suggested a tasteful bouquet of pale pink gerbera
daisies but Noel moved to veto his suggestion, “Do they tell her I have confidence?”
Noel’s new friend gathered up the flowers sheathed in
clear cellophane with a bright fuchsia ribbon tied in a bow that resembled a
heart and placed them in his arm, “Dear
boy, gerbera daisies are the fifth most popular flower in the world and are
known to brighten just about anyone’s day but they’ll say what you want them to
say by the way you deliver them.”
Noel felt dizzy, “This
flower thing is overwhelming.”
Mr. Wincey nodded, “Indeed
but might I remind you so are affairs of the heart and don’t forget what I said
when I told you that true love offers great surprises. I know these beautiful daisies will say
exactly what you mean them to say when you see the look on her face when she
receives them. And might I also add, I look forward to
hearing how it goes! Please do come by
and share with me your story. I have a feeling it’s going to be a happy one.” Mr. Wincey winked at Noel and patted him on
the arm, “Now go be brave, dear boy. And remember, confidence.”
From his coat pocket, Noel offered a crumpled wad of cash
to Mr. Wincey, “At least let me pay for
them.”
Mr. Wincey refused, hiding his hands behind his back, “It’s my pleasure to do this for you, dear
boy. And I expect you’ll be back for
roses soon enough.”
Noel thanked him for his kindness and turned to leave and
called back, “Mr. Wincey?”
He looked to the eager boy carrying the flowers that
reminded him so much of himself so many years ago running off with a fist full
of wild flowers to Peggy’s window sill for the first time, “Yes, dear boy?”
Noel looked at the flowers safely nestled in the crook of
his arm and then to the florist. “I bet she thinks of you just as often.”
**
So pleased to share my current piece of short fiction. I am hoping to also post the other, 'Seated Women', over the weekend.
I wrote Bushel from the photograph displayed above. It served as a writing prompt. I didn't mean for it to but that's what evolved from encountering the image. I really love Mr. Wincey and hope you will too. I also love that it came about just before Valentine's Day. I'm not a big fan of the 'holiday' but there is always room for stories that promote love and happy feelings. So, this is for those of you who are closet romantics and those who choose to shout it all from the rooftops. As with 'Whistle' I am certain more edits and additions will come but for now, in my excitement of having finished something else, I wanted to share.
I also have a flash of something new to hit the page. There's already a working title and a character who hasn't quite introduced himself but I am certain he will.
Another Friday, another week complete.
Wherever your weekend takes you, enjoy. I am spending the evening tonight with my sister 'n' law. I see fancy drinks and lots of intelligent conversation in my near future. Yay!
In propinquity,
Nic
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