Showing posts with label fog. Show all posts
Showing posts with label fog. Show all posts

Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Unfinished Woman


Unfinished Woman

I am
by definition
an unfinished woman

a fragmented heart
an uneven dilemma

follow here

the perilous route
of a prosy poetess
defined only by work
on a theory of love

& when I perish

when the earth moves
they will discover my
bones embedded deep
within the rocky below

bones in the shape
of curious decrees
sentences stretching
for long distances

dispatching big words
transmitting veracities
indecipherable to the
average naked eye

I am
by definition
an unfinished woman

a tortured daughter
an uncompromised lover

follow here

my resolute advice
my unrivaled practice

write your failures brilliantly

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So yesterday I worried I was facing writer’s block.  As soon as I completed my blog and shared it, I wrote a small chunk of dialogue for ‘Mute’.  Maybe saying it out loud helps?  I was grateful for the tiny flash and to have a small conversation set up the next stage of the story.  I also learned a few new things about my current characters I didn’t know before, that was exciting.  I employed the correct grammar too so let’s hope I make the grade.

I wrote the above poem yesterday.  It made me cry as I scribbled.  It came from a deep corner of my heart from the places I am most pure, about the pieces of me that so few know or who couldn’t be bothered to see.    

I’m still out of sorts today but it could be the gloomy fog and rain outside and the fact that so many of my people are in current states of disarray and I worry about them.  My wishes for them are peaceful breathing and optimal outcomes. 

Is it Friday yet?

Wild wild horses, we’ll ride them someday …

In propinquity,
Nic